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NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D60
Shutter Speed
1/25 second
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F/2.2
Focal Length
35 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
May 19, 2010, 8:04:07 PM
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Critique by themetagame May 19, 2010, 2:04:45 PM
I love clocks and watches, and I instantly fell in love with this piece.

I enjoy the fact that the focus is only on the upper characters, and the 5 6 7 8 9 are unreadable. The broken chain is another part to this amazing photo.

I think the background is lacking just a bit, and the top and bottom should be just a little darker to give the negative space some attention.
The hands of the clock should be in the photograph's focus. The dial and the 12 seem to be the focus, which is outstanding in of itself.

All in all, a beautifully crafted photo, but the negative space seems to be lacking just a bit.
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This is a beautiful piece of art work. I disagree with the fact that there is unused space. To me, the bottom of the picture is the only way you can tell that the watch is broken. I looked at it several ways myself and finally decided that I would not have known the watch had been broken. I think the watch has stopped on the time. It is a beautiful old watch that has been ripped from someone's hand or has been found in someone's old box in their closet. I love this work. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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:iconcr2o3:
love the colors
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:iconajikumar:
Ajikumar Jan 26, 2013  Student Filmographer
Nice Focus :)
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Tygahman Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool effect bro:beer:
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JimTheRealist Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I love the way this is focused. I would prefer to be able to see more of the face of the watch, but otherwise this shot is amazing.
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marymo75 Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist
Beautiful :)
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:iconmanse99:
i like the striking difference in perspective..
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:iconblackjack6164:
i LOVE POCKET WATCHES!BEAUTIFUL! :)
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:iconroguethescarredangel:
Beautiful, love the color and the title fits perfectly
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Peace-June Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
great
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