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the ability to dream

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I can say it is one of nicer images I've lately seen.
However as Werram asked for critique I'm going to add a bit more than in standard comment.
I love the certain yellowness as well as light and shade. It gives nice plushy, pillowy and warm kind of flavor to the picture. I have to admit that pocket watches have a special place in my heart, and I love those with visible mechanism. The focus spot is perfect
BUT
now I must to point out what's been dissatisfying for me - the front blur seems to be artificial in plastique kind of way and the background blurred lights catch my sight way too often - in other words - for me back lights draw too much attention from the watch and sharp focus of the text.
What's intriguing - when I scroll to see lower half of the watch (just few pixels below the center screw) the image gains nice push into third dimension, and the main focus is on the watch and text - and the front blur looks as natural as it can be.
All in all - it's a great photo which is 'alive' to some extent.
I'm REALLY looking forward to see more.