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the beauty of mother earth

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Submitted: January 8
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untitled IIby *werram

Photography / Animals, Plants & Nature / Landscapes

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Critique by ~fantasywriter42 Jan 8, 2013, 6:33:09 PM

Vision-To me, it seems as though much of the picture draws the eyes toward the central piece of land or to something that will lead to the central piece of land. Great way to direct the viewers attention to a specific point within the photograph.

Originality-This picture is very original. The view is quite unique in it's own way. A very good, fresh view.

Technique-The technique in this photograph show mastery of this medium and creates the impression the photographer is an expert.

Impact-The impact I received from the photograph is very strong. The minimal colour causes the colour present to pop and the detail is incredible!

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~Cr2O3 Feb 20, 2013

are the colors for real
or manipd?

~IldaraLoreth Jan 20, 2013

This is awesome!!

~pixelberrypie Jan 10, 2013

Lovely. Its like seeing frozen paths leading to a sunken summer island (excuse the poetic overtones.)

~spyders169 Jan 9, 2013

Wow I love this shot

*Lenmanaa Jan 9, 2013 Hobbyist Photographer

outstanding work

~watashi994 Jan 9, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Is so beautiful that I believe I stay there.
Brrrrr....

~StalkingCoco Jan 9, 2013

Nice photo, but lacks contrast and sharpness and has noise at the bottom.

Maybe a longer exposure, tighter aperture and take down the iso a step. Maybe a UV filter.

I might also crop it down about 100px off each side, but the proportions might look a bit odd.

Looking at it as a whole, it looks a bit like a stock background.

Also Exif data is always good.

The sad thing is; after picking fault with it, it is still better than my photographs.